Category: edci337-feedback

Hi Issac,

It’s good to read your blog again.

I like the fact that you gave specific explanations of each of the multimedia principles you used, which helped the reader understand the different applications of multimedia principles in practice. In addition, you have a more objective understanding of Sketchnote. It’s nice for you to mention that the performance of this tool varies depending on the situation. Finally, the content of your SketchNote is not cluttered, it looks interesting. This blog used multimedia principle, signalling principle and personalization principle.

Just a little suggestion, maybe it would be better to add questions?

All in all, you’ve done a nice job. Keep up the good work!

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Hi Zikai,

It’s really nice to read your blog again.

In this blog, each of your questions not only has a clear logic but also has your own unique opinions and sufficient reasons for different problems. Everyone has different learning methods, which are more objective and reasonable. In addition, your hands-on work has also done a great job, which impressed me a lot, well down! Overall, you have satisfied the multimedia principle, split-attention principle and segmenting principle respectively in this blog.

With one small improvement, I wonder if you can increase the font size in your blog so that it will be easier for your readers to read.

To sum up, you have done a good job！

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Hi Chole，

It’s great to read your blog again.

The answers in this blog are concise, clear and accurate, with no superfluous information presented. At the same time, the vinegar font you used to differentiate the questions from the answers, making it easier for the reader to understand. In addition, I like your drawing of Sketchnote a lot, which I think is very interesting. This blog meets the Multimedia Principle, Redundancy Principle and Spatial Principle respectively.

One small tip, maybe you can try incorporating the signalling principle into your questions or answers, using italics or colour to emphasize key points.

All in all, you did a great job. Thank you for sharing.

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Hey Issac,

It’s nice to read your blog. In my opinion, your answer to the first question is clear and accurate, you also able to explain the concepts of different principles in concise words. In addition, the image of the signaling principle and the second part of the text achieve an effective combination, which is a good agreement with the multimedia principle. Furthermore, your screen-edited video is quite interesting and could give readers a good sensory experience. The informal conversational style adopted satisfies the personalization principle.

Just one tip, and perhaps you could expand on the second part of the article with some specific examples of how you followed and ignored these principles.

In sum, this is a well-organized blog post and leaves me a good reading experience. Thanks for your sharing!

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Hey Zikai,

Thanks for sharing your blog post. Your answers to each question are relevant to the topic and explained and illustrated well. Secondly, I like your edited screencast video at the end of the post, which effectively combines modality and multimedia principle. The video not only uses the principle of multimedia learning but also expresses it with a conversational style, well done! In addition, the added YouTube video serves as an aid to the text as well as an extension to the article, allowing readers to stimulate and deepen their understanding and memory with multimedia objects after reading relevant concepts. 

Just one suggestion, perhaps it would be easier for readers to display the questions and answers in different fonts and sizes?

All in all, this is a very useful and informative blog post. Thanks again for sharing!

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Hey Chole, 

Really glad to read your blog. I could feel your thinking process and attitude towards the course when I reading this blog. I like the way you break down the answers to each question so that each answer could clearly be understood by the reader. Besides, each section of this blog is clear, concise, and organized. At the same time, I also like the picture used below the first question, which fits well with your answer. This is also a great example of the multimedia as well as the split-attention principle about how the audience could better achieve the purpose of learning through the combination of words and pictures. 

I wonder maybe using different fonts and colors to emphasize the main points of the post would make it easier for readers to remember the main concepts of this blog?

Overall, I think this is a well-organized and coherent blog post. Thanks for sharing!

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